Haiku 1

Golden color rains,
Crackles and breaks under shoes,
Spills dry, lifeless blood.

©2021 KT Workman

(Note: A form of Japanese poetry, a Haiku contains just 3 lines with a total of 17 syllables. The 1st line has 5 syllables, the 2nd 7, and the 3rd 5. It it usually about nature.)

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11 thoughts on “Haiku 1

  1. Linda Workman Smith

    I wonder who thought up this form of writing! I know it is from Japan, but ….
    Yours are always so “open to interpretation “ in their makeup. Lovely.

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  2. The depth found in the poetic forms, that you claim are new to you, show a talent beyond your experience. I know it doesn’t come as easy as your free verse, but the finished product is well worth the effort, Kat.

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    1. Thanks, J. No, it doesn’t come as easily, but I do enjoy working with the words to make them fit within a set confine.
      I miss your writing. Whether on your current blog, or the previous one, I always enjoyed reading your work. 💙

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  3. I remember when I first tried Haiku. I really liked it and preferred it to other forms. Until my Instructor began to explain all the rules and “proper” procedures that are related to it. For the most part, I continued to do it “my” way, lol. I like your words, they draw a very clear image with developed sense imagery as well.

    Elizabeth

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